The Elements Review: Interwoven Narratives of Suffering
Young Freya stays with her self-absorbed mother in Cornwall when she encounters teenage twins. "The only thing better than being aware of a secret," they advise her, "comes from possessing one of your own." In the weeks that follow, they will rape her, then entomb her breathing, blend of anxiety and frustration darting across their faces as they finally free her from her makeshift coffin.
This might have stood as the disturbing centrepiece of a novel, but it's only one of numerous horrific events in The Elements, which gathers four novellas – published distinctly between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters navigate past trauma and try to achieve peace in the current moment.
Debated Context and Thematic Exploration
The book's publication has been marred by the presence of Earth, the subsequent novella, on the preliminary list for a significant LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, nearly all other nominees pulled out in protest at the author's gender-critical views – and this year's prize has now been called off.
Conversation of gender identity issues is absent from The Elements, although the author touches on plenty of major issues. Homophobia, the influence of traditional and social media, caregiver abandonment and sexual violence are all examined.
Four Stories of Suffering
- In Water, a grieving woman named Willow transfers to a secluded Irish island after her husband is imprisoned for terrible crimes.
- In Earth, Evan is a soccer player on trial as an accomplice to rape.
- In Fire, the mature Freya manages vengeance with her work as a surgeon.
- In Air, a father travels to a funeral with his adolescent son, and ponders how much to disclose about his family's history.
Suffering is piled on suffering as damaged survivors seem destined to encounter each other repeatedly for forever
Related Narratives
Connections multiply. We initially encounter Evan as a boy trying to flee the island of Water. His trial's group contains the Freya who returns in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, collaborates with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Supporting characters from one story reappear in houses, taverns or judicial venues in another.
These plot threads may sound tangled, but the author knows how to drive a narrative – his previous popular Holocaust drama has sold numerous units, and he has been converted into dozens languages. His straightforward prose sparkles with gripping hooks: "ultimately, a doctor in the burns unit should be wiser than to toy with fire"; "the first thing I do when I arrive on the island is change my name".
Personality Portrayal and Storytelling Strength
Characters are drawn in succinct, effective lines: the compassionate Nigerian priest, the troubled pub landlord, the daughter at struggle with her mother. Some scenes resonate with melancholy power or perceptive humour: a boy is struck by his father after urinating at a football match; a biased island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour exchange jabs over cups of diluted tea.
The author's knack of carrying you wholeheartedly into each narrative gives the reappearance of a character or plot strand from an previous story a real frisson, for the opening times at least. Yet the cumulative effect of it all is numbing, and at times nearly comic: suffering is piled on suffering, chance on chance in a grim farce in which damaged survivors seem destined to bump into each other repeatedly for forever.
Conceptual Complexity and Final Assessment
If this sounds not exactly life and more like limbo, that is part of the author's point. These hurt people are burdened by the crimes they have endured, caught in patterns of thought and behavior that stir and spiral and may in turn harm others. The author has talked about the effect of his own experiences of mistreatment and he describes with understanding the way his ensemble negotiate this risky landscape, striving for remedies – seclusion, icy sea dips, forgiveness or bracing honesty – that might bring illumination.
The book's "elemental" structure isn't extremely informative, while the quick pace means the discussion of gender dynamics or social media is mainly superficial. But while The Elements is a flawed work, it's also a completely accessible, trauma-oriented chronicle: a valued rebuttal to the common fixation on authorities and criminals. The author illustrates how suffering can permeate lives and generations, and how time and tenderness can quieten its aftereffects.